You are getting some weird comments there Josh. hopefully i can make more sense of things. I was pleased with the evaluation presentation you delivered last week. You evaluated aspects of your production in come detial and were reflective about your outcomes. Good to have posted your notes too. On the back of your good work in class, i am a little less impressed by your blog. Your comments/analysis about aspects of your work are undeveloped and show you are not always thinking critically about the process. I suspect idleness is the culprit to some extent! Although you have fallen behind at variuos stages in the production, you managed to meet the final deadline which i'm pleased about. Your organisation of photoshoots has been pretty adhoc and basis. a greater variety of shots would have given you more options in your production. research into similar products is basic, but your audeince research is better and overall, you have presented your work with some care.
You are getting some weird comments there Josh. hopefully i can make more sense of things. I was pleased with the evaluation presentation you delivered last week. You evaluated aspects of your production in come detial and were reflective about your outcomes. Good to have posted your notes too. On the back of your good work in class, i am a little less impressed by your blog. Your comments/analysis about aspects of your work are undeveloped and show you are not always thinking critically about the process. I suspect idleness is the culprit to some extent! Although you have fallen behind at variuos stages in the production, you managed to meet the final deadline which i'm pleased about. Your organisation of photoshoots has been pretty adhoc and basis. a greater variety of shots would have given you more options in your production. research into similar products is basic, but your audeince research is better and overall, you have presented your work with some care.
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